The last three or so years have seen the emergence of some popular teen pregnancy stories so you'll have to excuse/ignore those who go "Not another pregnant teen drama!"

Having written one and working on another myself me personally I don't compare apples to oranges. All I care about is the storytelling first and foremost.

As for The Pregnancy Project reference IMHO I don't think you owed anyone an explaination. I've seen enough already to know this isn't a copycat story.

You know, this is a really interesting story! Love the idea.
Hahaha at the beginning, doesn't everyone have a teacher like that? XD
I have a confession. I love Lena. Just one of those characters you can't help but love, you know?
I shall return,
-Celia

I get it. It's just the start of her relationship with Seth. Update soon.

Oh, drama in the comments section over me? I've been reading them over, and I can tell I'm a very unlikeable person on here.

Anyway, read it like I promised you. Update soon, because I want to read more! And possibly I could create a whole war over the controversy I make in future chapters!

-Hermie

I sort of wish there were more descriptions, but it is enticing. Keep it up!

I love the audacity this story oozes with. You have my permission to proceed.

How do you keep so mnay storioes gonig at once!? It's crazy! But it's impressive. This story looks interesting. Also, my he4ad teacher's call Mr. Everett. Just thought I'd add that. And I agree with stephlorhaze; don't be discouraged by bad reviews just learn from their suggestions. And please keep writing, you're really good at it .

hey, I don't mean to discourage you but this story has already been done before... based off of real life events where a girl pretended to be pregnant for a school project. And there's a movie on it too, with the same title as your story I think.

I think you should go with it, don't be discouraged by one bad review, they don't speak for us all.
I really want to see where you take this story, it sounds interesting.

Hugs & kisses,
Steph.

Your character seems strong-willed. I have a feeling that this WILL turn out to be one of those stories where she learns something. Obviously, seeing as she seems so nonchalant about teen pregnancy and will come to find out that giving birth to a child actually is emotional, rough, and sort of a big deal ;)

I like the style of your writing. Your character's voice is clear and strong. Keep it up.

It's not unrealistic. After all, there are girls making pregnancy pacts. I'd like to see where you take this. Update soon!

Ah, this is what you were talking about. This looks good, and I'm very sure this will be realistic :)

I agree with the first post on the main character seeming a little off, but you can easily fix the thing about the nine months without revising the prologue. You pulled me in pretty well so I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story. :)

Personally, I don't find this plot very realistic. It would be rude not to list the reasons why, so here we go:

-For one, a average school year lasts nine months. Same time it takes to have a baby. Most likely, the project wouldn't take a whole school year to complete, and even if it was, you'd most likely give birth to the child over summer break. What's the point of that?

-What person doesn't know that it costs money to raise a kid?

Plus, I also find the main character unlikeable. I don't really like her.

Sorry for being so harsh, but I'd rather be honest with you than lie.

Hermie