Reviews for The Mending of a Heart
Abbey chapter 12 . 6/26/2014
I started reading this assuming that it'll mainly revolve around May and Trent. So I was honestly a bit worried that I'll find the POVs of other characters boring in comparison. I eventually found it pretty interesting once I figured out how all these people are tied together.

Btw, I'm starting to find Abeline's romance more interesring than that of May and Trent.
jet chapter 30 . 5/2/2014
really like your story I read it because I like trent
jet chapter 8 . 4/28/2014
f*** in finally
AKhwab chapter 27 . 7/7/2013
The ending! How can you torture me like that? ; 0
AKhwab chapter 25 . 7/7/2013
Harmony! That is The Hint!
AKhwab chapter 24 . 7/7/2013
Who is the Rebecca you mentioned in your author's note?
Guest chapter 27 . 7/7/2013
Another thing I would say is don't rush :)

As much as I love a quick update, I know creativity flows fast but attention to detail and adjustments take a little more time

Would I wait an hour for homemade pasta over five minutes for pot noodles? Yup you betcha.
Guest chapter 27 . 7/7/2013
Okay, so I really did enjoy this story. I would say the focus on so many characters can be a bit much, I do love Abeline and I like Braiden's character but I think it gets a bit much when u put all their sections and other characters like Riven/May/Trent into one chapter. I think you were trying to cover all perspectives but sometimes switching so many POVs at once can make the reader lose focus on the main characters and plot

Anyway, other than that nice work :) I look forward to Abeline's story.. I hope she rips Roy's balls off
Guest chapter 22 . 7/7/2013
Stupid May, stupid Trent :[
Guest chapter 16 . 7/7/2013
:) so you are planning on writing about Abeline. It made me laugh seeing that authors note, the irony. Well I look forward to it..

On with the story
Guest chapter 14 . 7/7/2013
Hiya, so far I really love Abeline. So much so that I kind of wish the whole story was based on her alone :D

Now on with the story
AKhwab chapter 21 . 7/7/2013
As draggy as I feel your story is getting, I still cannot help but wish that you actually didn't branch off with Ranger and Abeline.
AKhwab chapter 14 . 7/7/2013
I want to know more about Abeline and Ranger than Trent and May now. I kinda hate it that May is such a damsel-in-distress.
AKhwab chapter 2 . 7/7/2013
The last part was over-dramatic. By that, i mean that Smith over-reacted. Abeline & Trent are treating Mabel like some glass statue. I have got a few questions. Who is Barbara to Riven & Trent? Who is Riven to Trent? Who is Anthony to Trent?
smashthat chapter 27 . 7/7/2013
I'm not sure how I really feel about the story. I can agree it was good,and even well writen but I just think you have too much going on in one story. Now there is a cliffhanger about 4 or 5 other people. But other than that it was good.
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