|Reviews for Repitition|
| ThinkPi chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Hm...this sounds like a poem rooted in disgust, but not in a way I favor. Not that my preferences matter but I would imagine one uses poetry as an outlet for negative emotions (or emotions in general). Due to its length it's clear that the speaker is angry about something, but I figure that out in the fifth and final line Is it possible to outline the situation metaphorically? Is there potential for a resolution, a moment of realization or a sense of closure? The way it stands this poem feels incomplete, but it's just my own opinion. On a lighter note I do like where it was going, I can vouch for the concept :)
| Moonpress chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
I love your last line, and all of the implications that come with it.