Reviews for Holes
Ireland Ranger chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Very interesting...I actually had to read it a few times to understand some of the points (which is actually awesome when it comes to poetry) Keep it up!
Un-Ended Tales Unravel chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
You have woven these words together to create a vivid tapestry, magnificent to behold. Your rhymes are fantastic and really makes the poem flow. The ending is my favorite part, ending with a question that no one can really answer. I have already read it quite a few times and it is still an amazing poem. I hope you keep writing.
tolerate chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
I'm in love with the entire rhyme and how smoothly it flows, but the fifth line from the bottom is grammatically wrong. It should have been 'forgotten' and not 'forgot'. I'm sure you just wanted it to rhyme so you tried your best to fit the word in there. I know most of us don't really mind grammatical errors in poems, but it's a mistake hard to ignore. Though, I still find that your poem was quite the impressive work.

Keep writing!