Reviews for You Have Something On Your Face
Gabriel Lyman chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
I don't know about the last stanza but over all i really like this piece
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
I'm not sure if the last stanza was really necessary. You could have ended on a high point with soul, but, the last stanza brings something else to it that i have trouble explaining.
all in all its a great piece, and I hope to read more of your works
Moonpress chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Hahahaha :) Nice; I liked your rhythm and rhyme. It flowed well.