|Reviews for Kolcira's Chance|
| Daughterofthehun chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
Oh, where do I start? First off, don't give personal information, like your name and stuff. another thing is, some facts were unclear. Like, just by that womon singing, the man fell dead on the floor, or is he the man that captured her? All in all, I think you are a really good writer and I hope you continue it.