Reviews for Take My Pride
Val chapter 10 . 2/16
Ah, i like your story just fine. It's this minor discontinuation that disturb me. At previous chapter when Amanda looking for Mitch, Rory suggest they call him but can't because he didn't have a phone cell. But at chapter9, Mitch writing down his number, that i assume his phone cell? Or did they have phone at home? Which is highly unlikely..
Thx. God speed.
-val
Guest chapter 37 . 2/8
I must say, it does take quite the story to impress me, but yours has easily done that. Your story will be going in my favorites, and I'll likely reread it someday. I'll be getting my boyfriend to read it too, and he's better with CC than I am.
This story doesn't have many mistakes in spelling or grammar. You resolved your plot points, though I feel that Dominic could have used a little more closure. Still, small complaint next to a truly great story.
Keep writing!
Lykan
Kazuichirou N chapter 37 . 1/21
The sadness of finishing an epic story ;n;
Kazuichirou N chapter 18 . 1/15
YAAAAAAAY for prostitution... never thought i would say something like that.
Kazuichirou N chapter 1 . 1/15
Omg for some reason I imagine most rock stars to have weird accents and I feel bad about this but the manager and corey both sound like Russell Brand in my mind. I have no idea why. And I can't change it.
Krimsyn chapter 37 . 12/14/2013
Great story, the ups and downs weren't too drawn out but still had enough to make an impact. I loved the characters and storyline, their struggle makes the ending that much sweeter.
Mandy S. Bryan chapter 37 . 11/23/2013
Good story. Glad it worked out the way it did
calamity jane chapter 37 . 11/19/2013
Aw that was a good ending for these characters. Good story, sorry to see it end but hope to read something new from you soon!
ilovekarrots chapter 37 . 10/27/2013
It was good.
Remi chapter 37 . 10/11/2013
I do love a happy end. Especially when it is so well deserved. That was a really, really good story. Highly enjoyable and realistic
Light.Is.Me chapter 37 . 10/8/2013
Oh My Word! Did I stop reviewing? *looks around guiltily*
Well I loved this story and it made me so emotional! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in like forever and then didn't review as soon as it finished. :(
Can't wait on you next long story! XD
quayjahn chapter 37 . 9/24/2013
Awww, such a lovely end.

But I'm sad, it was the story I was looking forward to, every update something special!
koerle chapter 32 . 9/15/2013
What a drama packed chapter! I don't even have time for a long review as I need to continue raleading ;)
koerle chapter 31 . 9/15/2013
I understand Mitch feels like he has had it worse in his life, but to chew Corey out like that is over reacting to say the least. If that is te case he shouldn't have asked what Corey was thinking/feeling because everything pales in comparison to his story.
fleurmort chapter 37 . 9/14/2013
So beautiful. I loved it. It was easy to look past small mistakes because of how sweet the story was. I got misty eyed when I read "his sober mother". It really made the whole thing come together for me. You did a lovely job of making this story come full circle. Thanks for the good read. 3
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