Reviews for Take My Pride |
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![]() ![]() awesome chapter |
![]() ![]() I'm squeeing loudly as I read this chapter. I'm so excited Mitch let Corey meet Amanda! Love this story and hate having to wait for each update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! Oh gosh, I did mean Lauren! I'm so sorry! I just think of Karen Black when I imagine Lauren so it got all confusing. Anyway, I really liked this chapter. Mitch is really coming around. Their conversations are becoming more couple-ish and I'm incredibly happy for them! Hopefully all stays good, at least by the end lol. (: I'm so excited for next Monday! PS- I totally appreciate the Mae West quote! I adore her :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the update! Finally Amanda talked with Corey again. I'm looking forward to more webcam fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amanda acts way older than her age. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *falls on the floor laughing* That quote! Perfect way to start the chapter; I loved it XD As for Corey wearing the same outfit as Karen, my jaw literally dropped at the same time Joey's did. And then I had to laugh again. And it's so weird, when I saw this was updated, one of the first things I thought to myself was, 'I wonder when Corey's going to meet Mitch's siblings.' I'm glad he met at least one:) This chapter was awesome, starting with the quote *laughs again* and ending with that very last part. Keep up the great work:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuck, Corey did NOT just have a concert in a fucking dress, right? This guy clearly is a little too extravagant for his own good xD No wonder poor Joey constantly worries about his outfits... I'm glad Mitch trusts him enough to at least let him meet Amanda. Even if it wasn't really face to face. And I can actually see Amanda cutting off Corey's balls if he ever hurts her brother... XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Corey makes me think of a young Brian Molko, who I love dearly... I think it was inevitable he would wear a dress at some stage. Joey shouldn't be so surprised any more :) I love Joey though. I can picture him and Amanda meeting, and sighing and tutting at Mitch and Corey being ridiculous but adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gosh, I get so excited and drop whatever I'm doing when I see this has been updated! Great chapter, and I loved that Mitch let Corey in a little bit more:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! New reader here. I cannot wait until your next update. I'm addicted to your story already & read it in all of two days. I love Mitch & Corey. I hope things go smoothly next chapter, but a little spice never hurts either I guess ;3 All of the characters are so loveable! Well...besides Karen... I'm really curious but also scared to find out how this will end for her. Anyway, great story, I love it! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I giggled like a doofus when they screwed on the couch and got caught. I love where the story is going. I just desperately want Corey and Mitch and the kids to be happy. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() awesome chapter |
![]() ![]() awesome chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love this story :D I've been hooked since the start! And the way you wrote the characters is brilliant. I love Mitch and Corey - though if you don't mind me asking; what do they look like? |
![]() ![]() I can't tell if this is making me happy or making me want to rip my face off in frustration. That's terrifying. |