Reviews for Take My Pride
GrangerDanger333 chapter 24 . 7/8/2013
Mitch is so adorable! 3 And I can't wait to find out about Corey's family issues more... and for him to meet Mitch's family! :)
Also, I'm loving the quotes. How do you find them? Some of them have been so appropriate for the chapter!
creativesmarts chapter 24 . 7/8/2013
I love it! I hope Corey will be back from his tour soon...
Excited for an update on Monday, if there is one. But the double update was worth the two week wait:)
creativesmarts chapter 23 . 7/8/2013
*screams* an update!

*screams again* and there's going to be another one today!

*screams a third time* I loved this chapter!

Can I just say before I forget (I keep forgetting) that I love the quotes you put in the beginnings of the chapters, especially this one. I'm kind of a quote geek, so I look forward to those as much as the chapters themselves.

Now that I've said that, I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm getting more curious about Corey's parents. And I LOVE how you ended this chapter:)

Looking forward to the next one:)
Ney13 chapter 23 . 7/8/2013
Omfg, so freaking sweet!
GrangerDanger333 chapter 22 . 7/8/2013
I'm really enjoying this story. The characters and their interactions (Mitch and corey, Corey and lance, etc.) are really well written. I especially love how Mitch can't quite say no to Corey. Maybe it's a bit of a cliche story but who cares when it's so interestingly written, I love it! Really, honestly well done on your wonderful writing skills! Hope to see more soon! D
ramblingrobin chapter 22 . 6/30/2013
Another good chapter! Can't wait for the next one.
ramblingrobin chapter 21 . 6/30/2013
Holy hell! The sex on the door was hot!
Astir-Lewis chapter 22 . 6/26/2013
Mehhh. I see lots of unhealthy signs coming about...and a sad ending. But hopefully Im wrong. And I get this chapter completely it happened a lot to me. But I wanna see how this plays out. Can we get bi-weekly updates :3 Or at least a bi-weekly for 30 and 31 since its my birthday week? Yeah? Maybe? No? Okay :( lol
Guest chapter 22 . 6/25/2013
cool chapter again!
creativesmarts chapter 22 . 6/24/2013
Loved this chapter, especially the end:) I'm really excited for the next chapter, as always, but this time especially...
ForeverWasteAway chapter 22 . 6/24/2013
Great chapter as always :) How many chapters will it be all up?

And also, in regards to the weed... Not really sure how to word this without sounding like a druggie, lol. But is Mitch's reaction supposed to be irrational? Or is it supposed to be a relatively big deal to us as readers as well? I understand why Mitch would react that way just because of what he's like, but I find it kind of hard to believe Joey would groan at the sight of weed. Am I over-thinking this and just nitpicking? lol
Mister Cat chapter 21 . 6/20/2013
I love how the story goes and love how giddy it made me feel, like a lovelorn highschool girl :p i only found minor typoes across all the chapters which didn't bother the flow. I absolutely love how lance and corey interact with the whole bad sex with your bff but still keep doing it regardless.
Guest chapter 21 . 6/18/2013
good chapter, cant wait for the next one
creativesmarts chapter 21 . 6/18/2013
Yay, another update:) I like this chapter, I'm glad things are sort of working out for these two. And Mitch is starting to trust Corey more. I hope Mitch will decide to go to that party, just because I love the part of a story when different characters meet, and I want him to meet the band.
Anyway, I cannot wait for the next chapter, as always:)
Midnights Scream chapter 21 . 6/18/2013
lol. I love Lance and I'm glad Corey has him as a friend. Yay Mitch taking a step in the right direction! I'm excited to see how this goes. great job!
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