Reviews for Take My Pride
Facella chapter 14 . 4/29/2013
Wait, did I get that right? His mother sold Mitch to a friend when he was 13? I think I hate her even more now... I kinda already guessed there was something like that, but that's just awful.
I guess everybody on drugs reacts differently, so she might be credible. I don't have much experience with people like that either, so I'll probably believe almost everything you throw out there :P It's not that big of a deal, if you ask me, since she doesn't get to tell her own story. If this was a story about a drug addict, I'd want more research etc., but since it's Mitch's and Corey's story, it's perfectly fine the way it is.
I absolutely understand both Mitch and Amanda. It's hard to hate your mother no matter what she did to you. But because of everything she did do you sometimes can't help it.
Stupid neighbours. They should've called the cops earlier. It should be obvious that the mother is on drugs and the children are being raised by their older brother. That should be enough cause to call the police. When you start hearing screaming it's probably too late. Though I'm glad Amanda kept her cool and they didn't find out how much is going wrong in that household.
Ney13 chapter 14 . 4/29/2013
I can slightly see where Mitch is coming from, not abandoning his mother. I really liked this chapter, as it showed tension between the family, even though Mitch adores them.
creativesmarts chapter 14 . 4/29/2013
Can't wait for the next update:)
Guest chapter 14 . 4/29/2013
good chapter
sleepyreader chapter 14 . 4/29/2013
I love your stories. I felt sad when 366 Days was removed due to plagiarism.

Oh, have you heard "Daylight" by Maroon 5? It always reminds of Mitchell and Corey's relationship whenever I hear it.
marginal-utility chapter 14 . 4/29/2013
I like Corey's POV.
creativesmarts chapter 13 . 4/28/2013
Love:) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/27/2013
Lol, that was funny:)
creativesmarts chapter 4 . 4/27/2013
Aw...I feel so bad for this guy:(
creativesmarts chapter 2 . 4/27/2013
Omg, this is so depressing...
...reading the next chapter now...
Astir-Lewis chapter 13 . 4/24/2013
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH that was so amaze balls :) I love this story so much. They're kind of cute in a very sarcastic crazy way, and Corey is a persistent little bugger. But again, I loved it, and until next week,

Astir 3
allhallowstheless chapter 13 . 4/23/2013
This is a really incredible story. I love your way with words, how you twist them into people that get me emotionally involved in them to the point of needing them. This is so great. Thank you.
Facella chapter 13 . 4/23/2013
So it was just me being tired and getting confused by stuff... Sorry! xD But thanks for clarifying.
Anyway, nice chapter. I like that the romance is relatively slow moving. Anything else just wouldn't be very credible.
Corey is one sneaky bastard... Setting up a date instead of just an appointment to fuck! Poor Mitch has no chance of escaping him. :P
Good luck with your papers. You can't die yet, first I need you to finish this story. D8
ForeverWasteAway chapter 13 . 4/23/2013
I'm not sure I've reviewed this story before but after reading that last chapters and then browsing through the reviews, I felt the need to say something.

Write what you want, if it's therapeutic to do so. I didn't come to this site expecting a perfect novel ready for publication. This story isn't perfect, but what story is? I like the plot, I like the characters, and I get excited when there's a new chapter.

I just feel like some of the reviewers almost feel a sense of entitlement when it comes to your writing and this story. I mean I'm just gonna go ahead and say it, S. H. Marr's review was rude. There was no need to begin it with "Ugh." like you're being forced to read this story against your will. It is not a chore, so stop acting like it. If you don't like the story, don't read it. Or, if you don't like the story but want to still give your 2 cents, write it in a more graceful and polite way. It's not hard to be nice.
marginal-utility chapter 13 . 4/23/2013
That was clever of Corey :)
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