Reviews for Take My Pride
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 3 . 2/23/2013
Yes it did answer my question lol. I'm glad that Corey is off the drugs and alcohol - well, for now at least. Who knows if he'll get back on it later on. I'm looking forward to seeing Corey and Mitch meeting up again ;)
Guest chapter 3 . 2/19/2013
Yeah, I definitely like this chapter as well. It wasn't overly emotional and unrealistic, hence, Mitch was actually belivable in his encounter with Corey. There weren't any 'mushy' realisations that would certainly not fit in that situation, at least yet. I was relieved that Corey after this one meeting didn't suddenly felt the need to save Mitch from his situation, as I've read many fics that went that way and it was hardly realistic in my opinion. I'm waiting for more :)
Skyless11 chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
sheesh that was awesome *...* thank goodness I don't have school for another few hours else I doubt I could concentrate on anything but this xD
Yes I absolutely loved this chapter. First contact FTW! can't wait to see how it develops :D
good going and until next time!

p.s. hahaha I loved the reaction of the female hooker xD twas so funny xD
foreveran chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
I was wondering and I'm sorry if you mentioned it but what was the spark for this story?
Aww okay I asked b/c I wanted to know what I was getting into although all your stories that I've read generally end happily (if thats a word :P) although I'll admit the ones that end way differently than you expected have a longer impression.
As for this weeks update I'm glad they meet, and we sort of get a better description of how they look. As for Corey how could he ask for bareback omg what if Mitch was infected does he not question these things?! and it would have been fun to be in Mitch's head throughout this scene to see what he was thinking. anyways cant wait for next week, the update was amazing as always : D
DawnSister chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
I certainly did like their first meeting. I'd like to see it from both sides of that coin though *eyebrows raised hopefully*. I liked it that Mitch had no idea who Corey was, he doesn't strike me as the kind that will get star struck anyway.

Good chapter, look forward to the next.

JDKlaus chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
I'm torn right now. On one hand I really want him and Dom back together. On the other hand I kind of hope he starts something with his very well hung Hooker. Another great chapter.
Skyless11 chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
Srry it took so long to review xD I did read the two chapters in time, but more on the run since you update at odd times for me xD I re read them both carefully now xD

So first. I like Corey. He may be a bit of an ass but he is still likeable and the "faithfulness" thingie really puts him so much above many others.
Second. i like Mitch. Thing is... normally you'd say that "wow what a sad situation, so special, pitiable" but really, that's the situation of so many girls and boys in today's world... And the concordance with the reality is sad indeed. Although I am highly against prostitution, I admire people like Mitch so I really like your other main character too.
So I like Corey, I like Mitch, I'll love the story :D Please bring the new chapter soon!
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
Oh Mitch! You poor, poor thing! I'm honestly trying to get my head around American laws because in Australia, you can get help for this sort of thing - like financial help. It's an interesting read though. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter :)
music.freaxxx chapter 2 . 2/12/2013
Yayy! New story! I don't know how I missed the first chapter in my inbox, but I'm definitely happy that I read this. Poor Mitch, god his mom is a b!tch... Joey, though, seems pretty cool. Corey, I'm looking forward to his story, and Mitch's, and definitely their intersection!
WindSpiral chapter 2 . 2/11/2013
Awwww poor Mitch!

I hate situations like this one. His mom is eviiiiil, and there's not much he can do to get away with the other three kids.

So if Mitchell never tells any 'customers'(...uughh) his real name, then when will Corey find out what it is when they meet?

I don't really know what else to say at the moment, but I will probably have much more to say after the two of them meet, which I hope will be soon. XD

Bye Bye, WindSpiral
Janie chapter 2 . 2/11/2013
Okay it was a good chapter, but it left me slightly confused about Mitch and how he will fit into the big picture. Can't wait for chapter 3.
Vega Nightshade chapter 2 . 2/11/2013
My heart hurts when I read it, but life can be seriosuly cruel and there are people who have to deal with that, while others whine about not being able to buy a bigger flat screen or a better car. Reading your story makes me rememeber not to be overly complacent and judging people without knowing much about them and their situation if such an idea ever came to my head. Plus, your writing up to now was always of very good quality, just the right amount between dialogue and decriptions, with quite the realistic feel, the characters nicely developed. I'm waiting for more chapters to come.
The Infinity chapter 2 . 2/11/2013
Oh goodness. This is going to be an intense one.

And I love it.
foreveran chapter 2 . 2/11/2013
This is really interesting so far. I might wait until you finish teh wholes tory before I continue just because i really dislike waiting but I might read it because i really want to learn more about these 2 characters. I feel bad for Corey he geuinely seems to love Nicki but I guess it wasn't in them to stay together long luckily he has his friend to help him. Poor Mitch doing what he can to help his family, I wish though he could try to get his mom into rehab or something that really terrible of her to leave it up to him to take care of the family. I really cant wait to read more and see how it all plays out... could you reveal if the ending is happy or satisfying for a reader at least?
DawnSister chapter 2 . 2/11/2013
Great intro to Mitch. What a shite life he has, but then this is your way of showing us the two different sides of the coin. What I'm interested in now is how they are going to come together and how much shit there is going to be as it happens.
It certainly seems like Mitch needs a saviour, although it also seems like Corey needs a saviour too, or someone to kick his ass and show him what he has to be grateful for.

Great story so far though,

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