Great intro to Mitch. What a shite life he has, but then this is your way of showing us the two different sides of the coin. What I'm interested in now is how they are going to come together and how much shit there is going to be as it happens.
It certainly seems like Mitch needs a saviour, although it also seems like Corey needs a saviour too, or someone to kick his ass and show him what he has to be grateful for.

Great story so far though,

DS

This is perfect! I love band stories! I'm writing one at the moment myself. Anyways. I love this so far and I felt really bad for Corey at the end. Can't wait to read more!

This is really cool. I usually leave way longer reviews but I'm really busy so I will just follow this and stuff. I will leave a longer review next time I promise!

Loving this so far

Bye Bye, WindSpiral

Aw, poor Corey. This seems like a good start. Of course it hasn't quite started yet since there is another side to the story that you need to introduce so this is basically the build up.

It's a good build up though and I enjoyed it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

DS

This is great so far! Again, it's different but I'm willing to give it a go. Excited for the next chapter :)

Okay, I absolutely love this so far. I wish I had the patience to wait until all chapters are posted and read it all at once. I'm dying to keep reading now and find out what happens next.

Another great one. c:

I'll review more in depth tomorrow.

Heart,
Lil' Monster