Reviews for Take My Pride |
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![]() ![]() I must say, it does take quite the story to impress me, but yours has easily done that. Your story will be going in my favorites, and I'll likely reread it someday. I'll be getting my boyfriend to read it too, and he's better with CC than I am. This story doesn't have many mistakes in spelling or grammar. You resolved your plot points, though I feel that Dominic could have used a little more closure. Still, small complaint next to a truly great story. Keep writing! Lykan |
![]() ![]() ![]() The sadness of finishing an epic story ;n; |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAAAAAAAY for prostitution... never thought i would say something like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg for some reason I imagine most rock stars to have weird accents and I feel bad about this but the manager and corey both sound like Russell Brand in my mind. I have no idea why. And I can't change it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, the ups and downs weren't too drawn out but still had enough to make an impact. I loved the characters and storyline, their struggle makes the ending that much sweeter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. Glad it worked out the way it did |
![]() ![]() Aw that was a good ending for these characters. Good story, sorry to see it end but hope to read something new from you soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good. |
![]() ![]() I do love a happy end. Especially when it is so well deserved. That was a really, really good story. Highly enjoyable and realistic |
![]() ![]() Oh My Word! Did I stop reviewing? *looks around guiltily* Well I loved this story and it made me so emotional! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in like forever and then didn't review as soon as it finished. :( Can't wait on you next long story! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, such a lovely end. But I'm sad, it was the story I was looking forward to, every update something special! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a drama packed chapter! I don't even have time for a long review as I need to continue raleading ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I understand Mitch feels like he has had it worse in his life, but to chew Corey out like that is over reacting to say the least. If that is te case he shouldn't have asked what Corey was thinking/feeling because everything pales in comparison to his story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So beautiful. I loved it. It was easy to look past small mistakes because of how sweet the story was. I got misty eyed when I read "his sober mother". It really made the whole thing come together for me. You did a lovely job of making this story come full circle. Thanks for the good read. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I truly don't think it's legal to have loved a story this much. As sad as I am that it's over, this was a perfect ending. |