Reviews for Take My Pride
barca chapter 37 . 9/9/2013
this story was amazingly beautiful and one of the best story i have read on this site so thank you for writing it and posting it for us to enjoy xxx
Stagah chapter 35 . 9/8/2013
Considering the kids are his world, leaving them for 7months is a bit extreme! Would of made more sense if he flew out to Corey every few weeks, to the country he was in... Like people rarely leave their kids for so long unless they're forced?
ramblingrobin chapter 37 . 9/8/2013
Thanks so much for this story. It is one of my favorites. The ending was wonderful.
JessieGT chapter 37 . 9/7/2013
I loved it! Great ending :)
GrangerDanger333 chapter 37 . 9/7/2013
You CANNOT say you're a terrible author! Even if you don't have time for fictionpress at the moment and you don't reply to the reviews, I just wanted to say I've enjoyed this story SO MUCH! It's brilliant. You're a brilliant writer. Congratulations on being able to write so well and make me very nearly cry and laugh so hard i actually did cry. This story is SO GOOD, I can't actually express it in words! The quotes really are brilliantly suited :) I know I haven't talked about anything in particular but just the whole story is great: the plot, the characters, the changes in the characters, the relationships, everything seemed truthful, if adorable-yet-cringy at some points. i'll stop ranting now. WELL DONE THOUGH. :D
Kaylin881 chapter 37 . 9/7/2013
Oh. Wow. The FEELS. You made me cry, bitch. I never cry at stories, but you made me cry. :')
creativesmarts chapter 37 . 9/6/2013
*sniffles* I can't even explain how utterly depressed I am that this story is finished; I get really emotional when I finish a story this great, knowing it's over.
*sigh* Of course I'll come back and reread it occasionally, like I do with all amazing stories, but I'll miss looking forward to a new update every Monday and anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I do love the way you ended it.
I don't really know what else to say other than great job, and I look forward to anything you might do in the future:)
creativesmarts chapter 36 . 9/6/2013
This was great, I'm a little sad for the last chapter, but I'm going to read it anyway.
indiarubber chapter 37 . 9/6/2013
3 Thank you :)
lostlamb chapter 37 . 9/6/2013
God I love you. This is beautiful. Freaking amazing good job.
indiarubber chapter 30 . 9/6/2013
Words cannot express how excited I was when I opened my email this morning. I was beyond words. Thank you so, so much for this wonderful, unexpected gift. I wish you the absolute best of luck in your studies :)
creativesmarts chapter 35 . 9/6/2013
I wonder if the chorus of the new song is going to be Mitch's lullaby...maybe not, I don't know. Just guessing.
taradactyl chapter 37 . 9/6/2013
creativesmarts chapter 34 . 9/6/2013
When Mitch started crying towards the middle of the chapter I felt so emotional, I almost cried myself...
Catharses chapter 37 . 9/6/2013
thanks for finishing this story (:
loved it.
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