Reviews for Take My Pride
Preposterous chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
Corey and mitch together is hot. I like.
Preposterous chapter 2 . 8/3/2013
Gritty chapter. I like the depth and I'm already falling for Mitch.
Bananafishh chapter 27 . 8/3/2013
Why have you shied away from sex scenes I'm the past? You're great at it! A lot lot better then those who put sex in literally every spare space even though they are terrible at it. So glad its nearly Monday. Kudos to you author, this is awesome sauce xxxxxx
calamity jane chapter 27 . 7/31/2013
Yes, finally, Home Sweet Home! I could actually feel Corey's anticipation/excitement/nervousness building up during the flight, haha!

I was also worried for a sec when Mitch's mom found him on the comp, I thought something worse was going to happen, phew.

Mitch made a few giant strides forward in this chap, but introducing the kids to Corey, wow.

You had me practically on the edge of my seat while reading this chap, which just proves how talented you are. Now comes the hard part and waiting for the next update! Keep up the great work!
Kaylin881 chapter 27 . 7/31/2013
Okay...Corey's reaction won me over on the haircut. Nice reunion, by the way. I also like Chloe's reaction to meeting Corey - she's a perfect representation of her age. On that note, Mitch finally let Corey "meet" them - now the next step is an actual physical meeting! :D
Facella chapter 27 . 7/31/2013
Oh fuck. The poor kid. xD
goldenraziel chapter 27 . 7/30/2013
Literally addicted tothis story. 3 keep on writing!
UnbridledSilence chapter 27 . 7/30/2013
Eh, I wandered through today and found the update... 's'all good. XD
Liked the end to this chapter.
ramblingrobin chapter 27 . 7/30/2013
Dear God, I think I love you for writing this story. And I love Mitch's haircut!
creativesmarts chapter 27 . 7/30/2013
*dies because of inability to breathe due to uncontrollable laughter*
...wish I was that kid...
marginal-utility chapter 27 . 7/30/2013
Mitch called that one accurately.
Ney13 chapter 27 . 7/30/2013
Yay! He's back:D
creativesmarts chapter 26 . 7/29/2013
I was rereading this chapter, and I realized you made a typo: you had Nick handing a plate to Corey instead of Mitch. It isn't that important, but still, I thought I'd point it out.
Can't wait for the next update:)
Guest chapter 26 . 7/23/2013
cool chapter once again
Astir-Lewis chapter 26 . 7/23/2013
I just. It just. We just. He just. She just. Gaaaaaaaaaaah! So I'm seeing a hair cut in order. Yes? Yes. Please? And now I see the relationship blossoming into something legit, legit. I'm excited. I love this story. I love it. Loooove it.
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