Reviews for Take My Pride |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor mitch anx manda. She's a good girl. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Corey and mitch together is hot. I like. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gritty chapter. I like the depth and I'm already falling for Mitch. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why have you shied away from sex scenes I'm the past? You're great at it! A lot lot better then those who put sex in literally every spare space even though they are terrible at it. So glad its nearly Monday. Kudos to you author, this is awesome sauce xxxxxx |
![]() ![]() Yes, finally, Home Sweet Home! I could actually feel Corey's anticipation/excitement/nervousness building up during the flight, haha! I was also worried for a sec when Mitch's mom found him on the comp, I thought something worse was going to happen, phew. Mitch made a few giant strides forward in this chap, but introducing the kids to Corey, wow. You had me practically on the edge of my seat while reading this chap, which just proves how talented you are. Now comes the hard part and waiting for the next update! Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay...Corey's reaction won me over on the haircut. Nice reunion, by the way. I also like Chloe's reaction to meeting Corey - she's a perfect representation of her age. On that note, Mitch finally let Corey "meet" them - now the next step is an actual physical meeting! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh fuck. The poor kid. xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Literally addicted tothis story. 3 keep on writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh, I wandered through today and found the update... 's'all good. XD Liked the end to this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear God, I think I love you for writing this story. And I love Mitch's haircut! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *dies because of inability to breathe due to uncontrollable laughter* ...wish I was that kid... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mitch called that one accurately. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! He's back:D |
![]() ![]() I was rereading this chapter, and I realized you made a typo: you had Nick handing a plate to Corey instead of Mitch. It isn't that important, but still, I thought I'd point it out. Can't wait for the next update:) |
![]() ![]() cool chapter once again |