Reviews for Take My Pride
Vega Nightshade chapter 26 . 7/23/2013
Oh my, I just love Mitch's sister. Amanda and her bluntness, which would be logical has roots in her circumstances, is sometimes so precious...
calamity jane chapter 26 . 7/23/2013
First off, let me apologize for not reviewing earlier. I started reading this story about a week ago and finally caught up!

I really like this story and the way you write. Your writing flows naturally, making it easy to read and follow. I also think the pace of the story is natural for these characters, if it moved faster it would just feel rushed. Speaking of characters, I luv them all, except of course their mother. Even tho he can be frustrating at times, Mitch is such a good character to read about cos there's so many complexities to him and the sacrifices he's made for his family, whoa.

Corey is just adorable, he's so much fun to read and I luv the way he "handles" Mitch. He wants a relationship with him so bad, I almost feel sorry for him cos Mitch doesn't make it easy for him. I was happy to see the end of Nicki too, that guy sounded like a real jerk.

The kids, Amanda, Chloe and Rory are great too. You really feel for them, cos of their situation, but you admire them too for dealing with it so well. Sometimes I forget Amanda is still a kid the way she talks.

Nick, Alice, Lance, Xander, Stef and Karen are all great too. I'd like to get to know the band members a little more tho, I feel I know a lot more about Alice and Nick than I do Corey's bandmates.

Oh and last but not least, Joey! I absolutely luv him! He has such a great attitude and handle his "children" (RHA members) very well lol!

Keep up the awesome job and I look forward to your next chapter!
morningstorm70 chapter 26 . 7/23/2013
Hurry home Corey
UnbridledSilence chapter 26 . 7/22/2013
Gotta say this is one of the few stories I check back for multiple times in the day it's supposed to post. I've NO idea what it is about it but I adore it. Can't WAIT for it to be done so I can rearward it frequently! XD
kaylein26 chapter 26 . 7/22/2013
LOVE THIS STORY! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Catharses chapter 26 . 7/22/2013
wow. this story has now become one of my favorite slashes. can't wait for more :D
fleurmort chapter 26 . 7/22/2013
Oh my gosh! I don't want Mitchell to cut his hair! XD I'm too attached to the image I have of a long haired guy with great cheek bones lol! But I'm sure Corey will love it so I guess I have to get used to it :P
Great chapter though! I love how even though your story is based around a prostitute, it doesn't rely so heavily on the sex to make it move and flow. About Nick & Alice, I adore them! Wish the Carters could just live with them. I know the younger kids need parental figures, but so do Mitch & Amanda. I feel like they haven't gotten a chance to be teenagers, let alone children. ):
Anywho, I'm so excited for next chapter! :D Keep up the great work! 3
GrangerDanger333 chapter 26 . 7/22/2013
They're going to have some seriously hot sex when Corey finally gets home I bet. ;) I actually just love their interactions, the way they speak to each other and Mitch slips up and admits he's kinda missing him. It's adorable. Brilliant writing! :D
JessieGT chapter 26 . 7/22/2013
I've been reading since you started this story and I just wanted to say - I LOVE IT! I look forward to my email letting me know you updated. Corey & Mitch forever!
creativesmarts chapter 26 . 7/22/2013
I hope Corey comes home soon. I wonder if Mitch really will cut his hair and grow a stubble and how Corey would react he did.
Anyway, love the chapter. Can't wait for the next one:)
Kaylin881 chapter 26 . 7/22/2013
Haha...reading your responses to reviews just made me think about Amanda and Joey and how they're actually kind of slightly maybe similar? I would like to see them meeting and discussing that at some point. :)

Also, I like Mitch with long hair. Does he HAVE to cut it? :/
marginal-utility chapter 26 . 7/22/2013
Short hair and stubble! :D great idea!
iamafuzzymonster chapter 25 . 7/19/2013
I'm kinda a new reader and I just got caught up and I would like to say that I love the storyline! Mitch can be a little frustrating haha But I think that was probably intentional. Keep up the good work! can't wait to see how the story plays out
ramblingrobin chapter 25 . 7/17/2013
Hurray for updates... sexy sexy updates
Guest chapter 25 . 7/16/2013
awesome chapter
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