This is so good. I really like how sentimental it is. Deep too.

It was short but it was really, really good. Your writing is so pretty. I wished I could write like you!

This is really cute, even though it's so short. I was recommended to you by another author and so far, I really like what you have put before me. Awesome job!

This reads like poetry more than prose. It's free verse, and not bad free verse at all.

i like this. who says you can't write? gurl you is cray. i say write more if anything. i want to see what else you can do. use your talent to it's fullest i always say.

Nice story! I really liked how deep you made it.

Interesting little snippet of what seems to be unrequited love. Great emotional structure and overall feeling. A good read.

This story is perfect. A nice, sweet little one shot that's charming and deep. Great job!

This is a great little one shot. Especially for a first story here. I think I'll put you on my favorites list.

Nice little story with a great sense of emotion. Thank you for reviewing my works and being such a fan. Keep up the good work.

Aww, so sweet! :)

I really like this. Even if it's short, it's very detailed and your character's feelings are put out there very well.