Reviews for Craniotomy
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
This to me seems like a bitter sweet poem. It makes us seem so impatient in wanting everything to change now instead of waiting to see what time offers us instead. It makes me think of tunnel vision, you can only see what's in front of you which isn't always the best option (in this case death), and sometimes you need to look around to see that there is always another option. Brilliant piece, I really liked the emotion and repetition and I completely agree with the other review that it's a macabre poem which I think is really egpffective and emotive. Beautiful piece! :)
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
What a macabre poem, but beautifully put together. The repetition added a nice rhythm to the ideas that made the work flow. Gorgeous but such sad writing!