Reviews for Why you don't go out after dark
StarryCat chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
Oh my gosh...wow o_o that's really creepy! Nice read!
The Poetic Hero chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
This is thrilling!I hope Amy isn't died or is she?
ReldanWater chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
So scary! This is something I would have nightmares about! *o*
Sealgirl101 chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Scary!
DisplacedPenLover chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
That freaked me out! This was a dream.. more like nightmare.
Brigitte Penvellyn chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
Wow, I love your writing style-very stream-of-consciousness. (Or maybe that's just this story?) In any case... nice work. :)
BetrayedByJustice chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
wow this is really deep and scary, you can feel the despiration to escape! well written, well done!:)
Fakety Mcfakename chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
You've got some really good word choice here, dude. "My nerves crackled," that's very effective imagery.
Also, the way you used the light/dark contrast of the streetlight to build suspense of the attacker worked
pseudonym77779 chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Amazing! Love a good thrill If you hadn't guessed I really like thrillers