Reviews for Counting Cans
zagato chapter 1 . 11/13/2017
This is great, thank you!
Deeper than Fathomless chapter 1 . 7/13/2015
Wow, you should start dividing these long stories up into chapters! This story has a simple plot, little characters but I am sure you could make it into something great!

The sex scene was totally unexpected, totally you! Steamy and quick! It's like you write good porn. We don't have to deal with bad acting or lame lines!

You deceived me! I assumed this would be my first time reading a T-rated story written by you. I wanted to see what you would do in place of the smut. But I love smut though...

Here comes the bad news. I felt like the sex scene was supposed to be passionate. Slow, sensual. Soft kisses, nibbles. I thought he would treat Annie differently than Ronnie. I re-read it, and I noticed you wrote they passionately kissed but why use a word to sum up two or three sentences of kissing!? She just went right at him! Maybe that's what you were going for though!

FLIPPER66 chapter 1 . 5/14/2013