Reviews for Fifty Words for Embarrassment |
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![]() ![]() ![]() you accidently posted chapter 17 again |
![]() ![]() ![]() No it can't be over! I really loved this story and your writing style. I was so nervous at the end that reed was goin to break up with her! But he never said "I love you" back! Anyways, great story, and I can't wait until the epilogue and the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! The story kept me hooked and I could (somehow) understand the pain Rhea is going through. I like the way you write, it's simple yet so so soooooo wonderful. And it catches the feelings of the readers. Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I love the emotion and the characters. Your narrator is great - her voice is clear and not whiny or overly dramatic. This line, though, this line got me: "I had missed that tone, the one that at once made fun of me and made me feel like I was in on the joke." I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon. I'm hooked |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's realy well written and I enjoy reading it. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This just keeps getting more intersting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intersting. I like it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting! i want to see where this goes... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sincerely wish Flo was called Florence more often, I just love it. Makes me think of music. She obviously needs to have a thing with Reed. And pretending to date one person simply to get to another person is idiotic, just a way to invite hurt feelings. So, I don't feel bad for Caleb at all. |