Reviews for Fifty Words for Embarrassment
SunnySideUp26 chapter 18 . 7/25/2013
you accidently posted chapter 17 again
SunnySideUp26 chapter 17 . 7/13/2013
No it can't be over! I really loved this story and your writing style. I was so nervous at the end that reed was goin to break up with her! But he never said "I love you" back! Anyways, great story, and I can't wait until the epilogue and the sequel!
Thecakeisalie chapter 15 . 6/28/2013
I love this! The story kept me hooked and I could (somehow) understand the pain Rhea is going through.
I like the way you write, it's simple yet so so soooooo wonderful.
And it catches the feelings of the readers. Great work!
Emma D Vine chapter 10 . 6/9/2013
I love this story. I love the emotion and the characters. Your narrator is great - her voice is clear and not whiny or overly dramatic.
This line, though, this line got me: "I had missed that tone, the one that at once made fun of me and made me feel like I was in on the joke." I love it.
GracieAnne13 chapter 9 . 5/16/2013
Update soon. I'm hooked
GracieAnne13 chapter 4 . 5/15/2013
I really like this story. It's realy well written and I enjoy reading it. Keep up the good work.
GracieAnne13 chapter 3 . 5/15/2013
This just keeps getting more intersting
GracieAnne13 chapter 2 . 5/15/2013
Intersting. I like it so far!
GracieAnne13 chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
YouRockMySox chapter 3 . 2/27/2013
i want to see where this goes...
Taint.Revile.Elude chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
I sincerely wish Flo was called Florence more often, I just love it. Makes me think of music.

She obviously needs to have a thing with Reed. And pretending to date one person simply to get to another person is idiotic, just a way to invite hurt feelings. So, I don't feel bad for Caleb at all.