Reviews for Merely Friends
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
It's a simple and elegant piece but very effective becuase you can almost feel the 'connection' between the speaker and her friend. Almost like there is something there but it can't be anything more than what it is and that, sadly, is friendship. It's a very heartbreaking piece, but beautiful nonetheless. Superb piece.
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
There is a simplistic sort of elegance to this... I liked it, especially the "but I have him, and you have her" and "I love him, not you, and you love her, not me". Like I say, simple language, but effective in every sense of their meaning. Good job! :)
phantom130 5 chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
Aww, this poem is sort of bitter sweet. I kind of feel sad reading this, because I can really relate to it. It's really beautifully written.