Reviews for View
R.K. Iris chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Wow...I kinda didn't get it in the beginning, but after reading the A/N at the bottom, it started making sense. Powerful stuff. Simply amazing!

R. K. Iris.
Star of Life chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
This reminded me of another poet on here, called Ygg, who writes something similar to this. To me, it seems like the MC is feeling the need to move and be progress yet remain capable of enjoying life at the same time. The rhymes were great and the flow was beautiful, with no typos to interrupt it. Good job, keep it up!