Reviews for Imagine
Monster the Vamelfaer chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Beautiful poem. :D The problems it addresses sound so much like some of the problems I struggled with in the past. It really touched me.
On a different note, to more of the dynamics of the actual poem, I found the rhyme scheme a little hard to identify at times. However, you did a great job keeping the tempo, and I like how you repeated that one stanza. I also feel like it would have been a little better if you grouped the lines into actual stanzas, rather than it being one long poem. It would be easier on the eyes, and easier to see when your having "a change of scene" of sorts.
But anyway, it was great. :3 Those technical things are nothing in comparison to the message of the poem itself.
- Monster -