Reviews for Dark Knight School for the extraordinary
Charcoalsketch chapter 3 . 3/9/2013
And that was tense. I loved how you slowly built up the tension and the drama. The description was really vivid. Can't wait for more.
Charcoalsketch chapter 2 . 2/16/2013
This seems like a very interesting story; the plot holds lots of potential. However you might want to space out the paragraphs a little more and be less comma happy as it can get confusing to read. The description you use is good, if a little overly flowery sometimes _ you might want to try and change the summary a little, as it makes the story seem a little Mary sue-ish, which I haven't seen much indication of yet. It's just the names -while there isn't anything wrong with them in principle, exotic names like Cressinda Moon can automatically make people assume your character is a Mary sue. I encourage you to keep writing
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Interesting! Can't wait for more!