|Reviews for moon and current|
| Brandy chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
This is one of those poems that almost makes me want to cry because I relate to it so well. Like all of your work, it is beautifully written. Once again, there is also a lot of decoding of symbolism. I enjoyed it a great deal!
| tolerate chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
I love your title and how it fits the poem perfectly. There's nothing much I can say about the poem because I love it too much and I just love the words that you've chosen. The flow is neither fast nor slow and it seems to be the ocean that takes me along with it. I think there is a contrast between him and her, like how he's bipolar and how she's not. I'm not sure if I'm interpretation of the poem is correct, but I like the way this poem makes me feel. Great job!