|Reviews for and the distance grows between us|
| electrical moon chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Wow. I love the first stanza and the conciseness/suggestiveness of this poem. I think the ending could be a bit more subtle, but I love it all the same.
| whisper queen chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
sad. i like the part about the lipgloss smear feeling like heartbreak.