Reviews for wednesday runaways
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 2 . 8/23/2014
I really liked this! I am not normally one for poetry, but this was really good!
stuck in bed chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
Hi! Your story has been added to the Poetry category on A Drop Of Romeo :) Here's your review:

‘wednesday runaways’ is a simple poem, full of simple words and a simple meaning. There are no grand gestures or words. It is there, for you to read and absorb. After all, runaway lovers is a common enough theme. Despite this, there is something new about this particular piece, this specific line: ‘two stupid teenagers in what they thought was love’. It makes you think. Is the poet right? Or is she voicing the opinion of others and we will never know? The decision is up to you and I think this makes this poem especially magical.
beautaliton chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
all your work kinda makes me want to cry, but at the same time scream about how wonderful life is. i demand you continue! lol, but seriously, you are so talented it's ridiculous.
skullszeyes chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Wow. I loved this. :)
believe in her chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Girl, you have some serious talent.
bowl of strawberries chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
i absolutely love this. love love love.
ellision chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
i love this poem. it was so simple and airy. the line and stanza breaks kept me reading in just the right way. the title is a great lead-in as well as an after thought to the poem, which is exactly what a title is supposed to do. great job.

the only problem i have is i feel like it's not supposed to stand alone. are you going to write more of these under the same umbrella? this one doesn't feel complete yet because the ending question leaves it unfinished-i like the unfinished feeling for this particular poem, but if you wanted to leave it that way, i'd love to see some sort of companion for it to make it feel complete eventually.

keep writing!
whisper queen chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
i like the format. nice job.