Reviews for The Kidnapping
SilentMaelstrom chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
You would think she wouldn't admit to being a novice at kidnapping, but she appears like a nice lady.. if a little bit off her rocker.
It seems a little unrealistic that he'd be so comfortable hanging out next to a dead body, but maybe that's just me.
Looking forward to the next chapter (:
WarriorArnelle chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Interesting story there... It's amusing and awkwardly cute at the same time. Although I can tell, just a little, that it's not a writing style you're used to. You almost seem, in your writing, like the kidnapper, "I told you this was my first time." All in all, though, I think that slightly insecure writing style fits the story, in a strange way.

Your grammar was pretty good here, and I, like I said, I found the story itself to be awkwardly charming. (Translation: good job!)