|Reviews for relativity ii|
| stars shine out chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
beautiful imagery as always!
| Subject005 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Strong as imagery, sort of gave me the impressions of the two sides of the web, the function (to catch the prey, even something described as as beautiful as a butterfly can be tangled upon it, it's destructive, almost evil) but then you paint the typical beauty of it, the little droplets clinging to its fibres, and it glistens in the moonlight. I first read it and didn't quite get it, but very good, simple and effective. And it makes me laugh how I've rambled on for much longer than your poem.