Reviews for Be My Valentine?
ThinkPi chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
"I love the sweet memory words imprint on me as a whole."

Really, really loved this line. I like the rhythm you chose for this poem, it wasn't strict but it had structure. A very loose feeling flow to the poem that allowed you to freely express how you felt outside the confines of a rhyme scheme, yet used small anchors of words to keep the rhythm in place as one kept reading. Great job on this one, I'd say you're improving everyday as a poet and this poem is a great reflection of that. :)
TheSilentRose chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Awwww! I loved this!
KaylaHeart chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Even though I have practically no love life myself, I am a sucker for Valentine's Day poems, and this is no different. Great job, very sweet!