Reviews for The Final Victor
AceThompson17 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Nice, I like this one.

I enjoyed and liked this very much.
Wavern16 chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
lol I'm betting you did great on the assignment! Great job buddy! Really angsty!
JWT chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
Very powerful final line.
Can't really think of much useful critique except that this story hurt me so that's a job well done. And I didn't notice any tense mistakes.
If this is the sort of thing you write for your class, then please do post more.
No Need To Argue chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
I loved it! Your writing style's very appealing. To me this felt very personal since my best friend past away exactly six months ago. I consider myself lucky I've never seen him in such a state.