Reviews for Wash
Gabriel Lyman chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
so say the thoughts of every working human being on the planet. the constant struggles just to wake up in the morning to get to that thing called work...succcckkkkkk.
forgottenwords7 chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
Wow, this was phenomenal.

To me, it sounded like a persons struggle through depression, as they try and fight their way out. You've written the emotion very well, and the pace was constant throughout.

Very nice :)
MallowsWins chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
I've missed your poetry.

What really stuck me about this piece was the way I could relate to it. I always feel your poetry, but rarely relate. This made me think about how the world and her cruelty can wear a person down, in both a figurative and literal way.

Lovely writing, as ever.