|Reviews for New World, New Lives|
| Miranon chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
Wow. I absolutely love the characters...please please please update soon! I'm would love to find out more about Chic'ya's background.
| BLOOD RED GEISHA chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Please update. I personally always wanted to write something like this and I am estatic that you are :D. I loved the dialogue and I liked how it was realistic and not at all sugar coated.
| Zireael07 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I love the chapter. Brilliant!
Will there be more?
| fleurdelislady chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
I love history and I think this is an interesting time period. The plot seems pretty interesting and I like Chic'ya and Girardino's characters, they seem like how I would imagine people of that time period to act.
| BrandonP chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
I really admire your creative process in building a story off a real historical document (or primary source), in this case a letter recounting a rape attempt. I also like how you chose to retell the incident from the native woman's point of view. However, I notice you describe the Native American woman's skin color three times; once would have sufficed to get across the image of a coppery-skinned woman. Overall very good.