|Reviews for For the Love of Jason|
| vanburen chapter 9 . 6/23/2004
wow, faboulous, bravissimo. a engaging and well written romance.
| vanburen chapter 8 . 6/22/2004
This is a sweet, wonderful little novella. It's slow, but in a good way, like "going down a river on a raft in summertime" kind of slow. I was gonna read the whole thing, but then I turned to the next chapter and there were like 5 more after that. So I'm off to bed now, but I'll definitely finish this!
| W3DNESDAY chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
ha, whaddya know.. my story's name is almost exactly the same (For Love of Helen .. although Helen isn't really a person like in your story)
anyway, i really like the names of your characters and your character Michael Raven really rouses up suspense
one thing i would like to comment on is the pace of your story.. i prefer faster-paced stories, and i think this chp. needed more "action" that propels the story
your summary sounds great, i look forward to reading more
| Clever Fox Cub chapter 9 . 6/10/2004
This is so entirely great! It's so touching and wonderfully-written! This is amazing! Terrific job here!
| Elena chapter 9 . 5/13/2004
Okay. this story is really really good. I can hardly understand why it doesn't have 200 reviews! I'm adding this review just to say good really really good job on this story, writerjc, it was just awsome. I hope you publish this story one day, i'll buy it.
| incognitus chapter 9 . 5/3/2004
I truly, truly love ur story and I think it rocks. It's so wonderfully touching that I just wanted to cry because it's all so beautiful. Thank you for this stroke of genius that really brightened my day :D
| zyanya204 chapter 9 . 4/24/2004
you have really a great way of weaving a story together... i like your literary style and you don't drag your plot around... the twists are very subtle but effective... keep up the excellent work! :)
| zyanya204 chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
i've read this story a dozen times and i still can't get enough of it!... i just really love how Micheal is first introduced into the plot... who would have expected him to be blind?
| WarriorHeart chapter 9 . 4/11/2004
This story was fantastic. I loved all of the characters, and the descrptions, and the plot was amazing. Thank you for the enjoyment. Keep up the fabulous writing!
| wildasthewolves chapter 9 . 4/10/2004
excellent story! you know, i should have read it sooner, but i finally found some spare time...i read this whole thing just today. kinda long for one sitting, but great none the less. keep up the great writing...update Unfinished Business (of course, this from someone who doesnt remember the last time she updated) bye!
| SteffieKay chapter 9 . 4/8/2004
I sincerly loved your story... it read like a novel and really drew the reader in. I do, however, think that you should work on the ending. The last several lines provide too much closure, the reader has an imagination too! It feels like the story was closed, but didn't want to yet. I sound crazy, but the last lines really don't match.
| StarBorn77 chapter 9 . 4/8/2004
Not only was that entertaining, but it was truly heartfelt with interesting characters. Great job.
| Wild Magelet chapter 9 . 3/22/2004
Aw. I think that says it all. :) Great writing.
| MissChiaroscuro chapter 2 . 1/31/2004
it's getting better... im starting to like it...
| MissChiaroscuro chapter 1 . 1/31/2004
the truth is, i don't really like tragedy...
it's not my kind of story...
i like the way you write... but sometimes it gets confusing especially when you rush into the story without an introduction of some sort.