Reviews for In My Day
Star of Life chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
The world is moving forward for better or for worse. Your poem made me think about that.

Brilliant piece of work, the rhymes are perfect and it flows smoothly.

On a side note: Music today stinks!
Jackson Farrow chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Bravo Vicky, loved it! And it rings so true.
Freiheit98 chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Interesting take and very true of today's society! Good write! You're rhyming is beautiful and the overall flow of the poem is wonderful! :D Keep it up!
Willowinthepines chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
creative and interesting brings a new light to technology. well written repetition worked well.
Mistakes-and-Memories chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
It's true! Everyone's inside in their own world plugged in, listening to empty music, and not caring for one another. The world is filled with crime and disrespect. I wish people would actually do something to change it.