Reviews for Eagan: Switchblade : November 2009
Dreamers-Requiem chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
I think you could have a lot more here. Even though it's only a short piece, and not a lot happens, you could really expand it; similar to what I've said before, really, maybe expand on the emotions of the characters. I really liked the opening, I think it's stronger than your usual description opening, and it gives a nice insight into his character. I think his actions do that too, throughout this, and it would be nice to see that sort of thing expanded, especially if you open it up so the reader can get a bit more into Eagan's head.