|Reviews for The Unexpected Phone call|
| G.D.Pastry chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
I loved it! Amazing story! The idea and plot were great and it was also beautifully written! I really enjoyed it. :) Definitely a worthwhile read.
| afern36 chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Interesting story. A nice short little read. I might add some bits of the phone conversation for the people he was on the line with the show how mundane his task is. Maybe some physical actions such as sighing or resting his head on his hand? Signs of boredom to help create a fuller picture. As is, it was quite the interesting story.