|Reviews for A competition of a true winner!|
| classicgriffinwhat chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Great? The grammar completly sucks! There are barely any commas and it's all bundled up together. It's a great plot and all but it's barely sufficient. hyoriu, I don't know WHAT your talking about SOME things, beecause that's just being nice.
| hyoriu chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
It's good need to correct some things, other than that great