Reviews for Snowflakes
thegirlwhocouldfly chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
I love the simplicity of this poem. It leaves a lot of room for interpretation by the reader. If you haven't noticed from reading some of my pieces, winter is one of my favorite seasons to write about.
I think you portray it nicely here. It reminds me of a child who was playing all afternoon in the snow. By the end of the day, she still can't get enough of it. She runs outside and lays down in the snow, watching the winter sky.
True Talker chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
Thank you for sharing this and the picture of the snowflake.
DarkInkyDreamer chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
Short but incredibly sweet, I'm only sorry it's taken me so long to read!

xx
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
The imagery here is so simplistic, but beautiful all the same! Nice piece, good job!
Ygg chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Despite the journey towards the dark, this has something véry comforting. Love the tension between blink and ebb, as if both have different speeds, evoking different emotional landscapes. Great work!
DougieM chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Short but sweet, it could be extended upon at some point if you want to make it longer but it is quite good how it is.