Reviews for A Fatal Shot
True Talker chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
Reading this makes me think. And reading this makes me want to share this when I care about a person I do and that is not something that is ever false it is ONLY true. REALLY.
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Oooh... brilliant imagery and I love the vocabulary used! There is one thing that I would suggest though: The lines starting "has shattered.." and "Then as..." both end with "at my feet", just an idea would maybe be to try and find an alternative way of bringing the same idea across, maybe something like "upon the floor" ? Just a suggestion, but nonetheless a good piece! Nice job :)
DougieM chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Good as usual, really great imagery, if I get a title for it I'll let you know.