Reviews for Suburban Dreams
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
I like the imagery because you can clearly grasp what you mean but I also like the way you end the first two stanzas - it's like a quip of how even the people with this so called 'dream' can end up being bored of it in the end. Towards the end of the piece, I was thinking to myself "This doesn't seem at all like a dream" and then you mentioned the nightmare. I think that was a clever way to end it. I find it irksome if people mention dreams coming true sometimes, because nightmares are also dreams so they can also come true - you have to realise that too. Brilliant piece!
True Talker chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
NO one says that it has to be that way. What do I mean? Every person is different and some people's lives are different.