Reviews for The Engelhardt Encounters
lifeisabook chapter 6 . 3/29/2013
Thank goodness this is not the end! Keep going, girl! This is great! Please check up on your dialogue though- it bugs me a little bit. Great work!

-Lifeisabook
lifeisabook chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
This is terrific! The storyline seems great, and you've got good characters that seem set up for some good developement. Your word choice is pretty impressive, too. I didn't see any grammatical or spelling errors that interfered with comprehension, though you definitely want to take a look at dialogue rules:

"This is great work," I said to myself. "If only she put commas after her quotes instead of periods!" Other than that, great job! :)

-Lifeisabook