This was beautiful and amazing in every way, shape and form.

I actually liked the beggining but it turned quite disappointing for me so I'll stop. It's not bad but it's not really my cup of tea and I usually like this kind of genre . It was quite disgusting and I don't know why.

I tried. I did. Because regardless, the writing is good. But I just KNOW that he'll end up with Obane, there are already signs. And I'm so sick of m/m stories where the protagonist ends up with his rapist. Rape is horrifing and seeing it being made light of is just sickening.

Really good story. I enjoyed it!

A few lingering questions. Does Obane live once he's held his baby out will he die? I'm not understanding whether the soul meld fixed that or if it is still going to happen.

Also, why did Tony's mom smell so foul to James when he hugged her? I was expecting to find out she was a dragon hunter or evil or something. But it was sort of an unexplained loose end.

Thanks for sharing this story. Well written, very very few typos, original story line. I loved it!

Ooooh ooh. I'm hoping we'll get another smut scene in their dragon forms? God that would be so hot.

I've never been a big fan of mpreg but I like this story. Usually the bearers are weak, feminine, mother types and this is a breath of fresh air. James is strong, dominant, angry, masculine, and unchanging in his personality.

I like it.

I hope you realize how emotionally frustrated I am right now, now that I know I won't be getting to watch the baby grow up.

MY BABYYY! WICKED WICKED TRICKSY AUTHOR YOU KILLED MAH BABYYYY! WHAT HAVE YOU DOONNEE?!

MY SEX BACON!
Yeah I'm going to be yelling that phrase for a few weeks.
Holy shit! Not my little Tarren! I know he's probaly not an "important" main character, but I have a soft spot for handicapped characters... I can't help it they're just so cute. If he dies I am blaming you!

Awww, Obane is just so romantic in some weird arrogant way.

uh oh...

How cute! in a weird morbid dragon killing animal way.

In Obane's perspective and mines also it wasn't rape though more of dubious consent, I think because he was raised as a human he doesn't know anything about the mating of dragons... Obane is a bastard but to outright say hes a rapist is a bit much.

I loved it , what an amazing story really captivated the reader from start to finish , all the trials and tribulations , all the things james went through all the good and the bad but he became stronger in the end and fought for his family .. His clan .james and obane they did meet at a odd time and although there first meeting wasn't good he grew to love him and accept him as his mate . Roume and dante and the little bundle of joy on the way as well . I hope you make a sequel to this because I would really like to read more about our favorite dragons and where they go from here .

Gosh, so good, don't know what to say! fantastic, so great! thank you, thank you!