Awww that was sweet. I feel ya about the Valentine's Day thing, too. Lil annoying when all you see is lovers everywhere. Ugh. Anyways... great chapter. Loved it. :)

Aww, this was so cute. It made me smile and laugh. I like your writing style, too. Thanks for this.

CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE :DDDDD
Wyriss is a really interesting name. I like it. ;)
There are some errors that I'm too lazy to point out here but there's one HUGE thing I must mention: after the line break, your POV changes from third to first to third. D: GAH! So yeah, if you just fix that and then go through and check spelling and stuff, this will be perfect. Can't wait to read more of your stuff! Thanks again for reading mine!

That was HILARIOUS. It is seldom when I favorite a completed work, but this is worth it!
Seriously, it was fluffy! Descriptive too. I felt like I could feel the emtion from the characters. Amazing.

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"I cry, just a little..."

I loved this! Ahhh it was so cute and I know what you mean feeling like crap! This made my night a bit better :)