Reviews for Restraint
tolerate chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I could picture this perfectly. It's that thing you do when you take a photo of you holding the sun in your fingers, yea? Nice way to describe it!
True Talker chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
An interesting way to view photography.
The Scarlet Berry chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
That was...that was odd...different...but in a good way, I guess...
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
I loved the imagery you created through this piece. Great job!
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Hm, very interesting POV here. Is it meant to be a God of some sort. I like the simple imagery of the life being a key, very interesting because it's simple yet important. I didn't really feel much restraint if I'm honest. I feel like this speaker is just toying with his/her options, almost they could if they wanted. I would have liked more imagery or something to describe his/her restraint, but that's just my opinion. I still think it's an excellent and thought provoking piece.
MechanicMasquerade chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
It's like...God's POV? Or some kind of 'Controller'? Not nessecarily a God, perhaps. Maybe something that...I don't know the word...something that has a lot of power? It sticks in your mind, over and over, making you think about how easily something like this could take your life, but it's simply on a whim that they don't