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nickyO chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
Like it. The last line adds lightness to the tone.
Reiz16 chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Eating the universe... Clever.
Purple Octopus Badger chapter 1 . 3/5/2013
Exactly how I feel about eating cereal after a long night of activities:
my saving grace
no need for greasy food
don't worry there is a time and place
a kid at heart
but tonight being hunger and worries begin to drift apart
as an avalanche of crunchy goodness begins to parade itself in my bowl
I started the night feeling empty
Now I am whole

Great poem again, really enjoying your work
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I loved this. I'm serious, I'm not lying. This is hilarious, and I love how you made eating cereal feel like you're eating the universe!