Reviews for Into the den |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Years late to the game. I am happy I was able to read this story. Though it has not been updated in over 4 years, I am inspired by the concept on the extinction of humanity, genetically modified humans, coming of age facilities, and Alpha/Carrier relationships. I would love to Read more from this author on other formats. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh man, i really missed this story. i was so glad to see that you had updated. i am really looking forward to more. i hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting concept. I look forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story, and i have found only minor things you could change, like a simple word exchange or word tense from future to past. 3 please continue it when you can, it's an amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah..its hard when you lost your inspiration.. regardless, i hope that you will find that eagernesa to write again and post an update soon because this is damn interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I'm glad ur not gonna forget about the story and I hope you find inspiration soon. But more importantly I hope you feel better soon and things get better for you. Have fun in Brazil. Great story so far also : D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow. It's a really interesting awesome story, please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's funny! How do the bind happen between an alpha and a carrier? They date before to leave or they must stay there a time? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't wait to see who you match up with him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shouldn't be there some law enforcers because they can't just let an Alpha abuse his power like that. Nice plot. Keep the updates going. |
![]() ![]() Plzzzzzzzzz update ur killing me PLZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Write more please! |
![]() ![]() Lls I loved it update |
![]() ![]() ![]() some grammatical mistakes, minor and understandable because your first language isn't English. other than that, the concept of the story is interesting and i look forward to more chapters . |