Reviews for Endless Chase
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
This piece gives off a very strong, almost empowering feel. It's almost like something a runner would say to motivate themselves before running in a marathon. I love the power implied in this piece, that sense of determination given off in the last line as well as the noun "juggernaut". A very clever piece, which I should go back to before my exams to help me motivate myself for them! Great haiku!
tolerate chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
It gives off a very strong feeling, like a strong force that will never stop running no matter what, as implied in the Haiku. It feels instant and immediate, like something played in a loop. Great Haiku! I believe you succeeded in bringing forth the meaning you are trying to show.