Reviews for Vigil
tolerate chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
This is maddeningly beautiful. The first line, "heaven could not wait for you" was a great line to start the poem with. I liked the way you phrased your words and "lungs collapsing" gave such an imagery. It made me think of lungs deflating onto a mattress. Another line, "but nothing sounds like you and never ever will" was so beautiful and I wish I could have thought of such lines. Honestly, this entire poem was breathtaking and the best poem I've read today.
believe in her chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
beautifully written.
Wondering Jew chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
This is perfect.